mid-day update

[lagilman]

Part II is done.

(and mam'selle editrix was right, everything in that scene that was important could be moved to a different scene, and that pared away excess verbiage nicely. Damn it. Also: lovely typo: tiny freen puds instead of tiny green buds.)

I have also filled two single-spaced pages with terms and names for the copy-editor's use. Pity the poor copy-editor on this one...


Taking a break to put away the rest of the grocery delivery, and then maybe a nap. Part III is on-notice.

Comments

[zita-h.livejournal.com]

Maybe you should have stuck with tiny freen puds. Sounds really interesting...

[neadods.livejournal.com]

tiny freen puds

I'm sure I read that porn.

[lagilman]

Was Jack top, bottom, or filling?

[neadods.livejournal.com]

More like Nine/Rose... we know what Jack's got down his pants!

[autojim.livejournal.com]

Well, given how small freen are, I would hope their puds are tiny, otherwise, they'd have a really hard time walking.

[lagilman]

nah, you're thinking of the Lesser Northern Freen. The Greater Northern Freen, also known as redkneed Freen, are much larger.

[autojim.livejournal.com]

Of course, Greater Northern Freen are non-migratory...

[lagilman]

it's difficult to migrate when your knees are sore...

(refrains from any "carrying coconuts" jokes. Anyway, freens don't have dorsal feathers)

[autojim.livejournal.com]

:)

[handlebar605.livejournal.com]

I was just thinking about what kind of story could be developed about Tiny Freen Puds and now their cousins, the greater & lesser Northern Freen

[fakefrenchie.livejournal.com]

ROTFLMAO

[fakefrenchie.livejournal.com]

I just checked the qwerty keyboard. f and g are right next to one another, so that explains freen. But p is no where near b. So how do you explain Puds for buds? LOL