Reason #toodamnmany why writers drink...
May. 7th, 2015 08:16 amOriginal opening line of Book 2: "They’d left nothing alive.“
After an entire day of word-wrangling, the new opening line:
"Isobel had been riding for three days, two to her destination and then a turnaround, when she found the bodies."
Yeah, that works. But dogdamn it, it took me HOURS and BRAIN BLOOD (and at least one walk around the neighborhood) to get the opening pages to finally do what I wanted them to do.
On the plus side, it should get easier today.
Should.
Right?
Except we had a local market fail: they have semi-sweet chocolate-covered graham crackers, but no dark chocolate-covered graham crackers. How am I supposed to work under these conditions?!
After an entire day of word-wrangling, the new opening line:
"Isobel had been riding for three days, two to her destination and then a turnaround, when she found the bodies."
Yeah, that works. But dogdamn it, it took me HOURS and BRAIN BLOOD (and at least one walk around the neighborhood) to get the opening pages to finally do what I wanted them to do.
On the plus side, it should get easier today.
Should.
Right?
Except we had a local market fail: they have semi-sweet chocolate-covered graham crackers, but no dark chocolate-covered graham crackers. How am I supposed to work under these conditions?!
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Date: 2015-05-07 03:17 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2015-05-07 04:29 pm (UTC)the horror
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Date: 2015-05-07 06:26 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2015-05-07 06:29 pm (UTC)This is my addiction: http://www.ashers.com/dark-chocolate-graham-crackers-1.html
(I could find them locally back on the east coast, but not so much here. And the thought of mail ordering them just feels...silly.)
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Date: 2015-05-07 09:21 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2015-05-08 02:49 pm (UTC)(BTW, looks like Your Area in October will be a go. Fair and Advance Warning...)