Betas, anyone?

[lagilman]

I have a short (2000 word) story I need fresh eyes on before I decide where it should go. Any volunteers?

(caveat: please don't volunteer if you don't feel comfortable giving useful and specific feedback. "I liked it" is nice but it doesn't really help at this stage. I like it too...)

Names taken, file to go out today. Thanks everyone!

Comments

[mtlawson.livejournal.com]

I'd love to help, but I wouldn't be able to finish it within the week. I'm stuck in training during the day, which means I have a full slate of regular work in the evening.