Well, Vineart War 3 was due today, but it looks like Monday will be the new Friday, with Mlle Editrix's permission. Figured out (in notes) why a section wasn't making me happy -- once that's fixed, the rest of the corrections should flow smoothly. "Should" being the magical word...
"Get Kai," he said, rubbing one forearm across his eyes, wishing they felt less gritty. "I only want to talk about this once." He left her, heading for the bathing room.
"Get Kai," he said, rubbing one forearm across his eyes, wishing they felt less gritty. "I only want to talk about this once." He left her, heading for the bathing room.