further to the writing....
Feb. 24th, 2010 10:32 amBoth agent and editor pinged a certain chapter as being a problem point, for the same reasons. On re-reading that chapter I knew, on the first page, what was wrong and how it needed to be fixed.
I think I knew it the first time around, too, but was rushing to get to the next part of the story and so tried to cram important information into an AsYouKnowBob overview.
Bad writer, no biscuit
Good editor/agent. Biscuits.
I think I knew it the first time around, too, but was rushing to get to the next part of the story and so tried to cram important information into an AsYouKnowBob overview.
Bad writer, no biscuit
Good editor/agent. Biscuits.
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Date: 2010-02-24 03:41 pm (UTC)That should have been your title for this post.
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Date: 2010-02-24 04:01 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-02-24 03:51 pm (UTC)