27 days til deadline

[lagilman]

comment from my beta-reader, on the most recent section: "the long space between notes in spots in this section is because I forgot I was supposed to be making them. Those are the places where the story just carries me along with it and if this were a paper book, I would be turning pages like mad. "

Okay, maybe I don't entirely hate this book right now.

*goes back to work*